Mrs D

Well done Natalie. You have met your second deadline. The storyboard is relatively successful and your transitions are well timed. You need to think about a few more shots - look at the mark scheme to help you. I would recommend another draft of a storyboard with more shots and another location - it is a little strange that you have one shot of an interior and then nothing else. Go back to your RMAs and count the shots and look at how the different locations work.