This is my fifth draft, I have changed the begining bit and added transitions in between the different shots of her spinning. makes it flow together better and because the singing is slow and relaxed, I think the transitions are in order to make it slow and smooth to go with the music. I have also superimposed her singing 'can you count me in' . I think this makes the video flow even smoother than it did before, as well as making it more interesting.
Gemma (aged 14) from Crowthone - 'I like how the music promo chnages from scene to scene. I think what has been done in the music promo links well to the song. The effects between the last three locations could be smother.'
ReplyDeleteJoe (aged 18)...from Bath.. Good transitions between each scene especially the spinning scene at the beginning. Clever relevance between the lyrics and the camera shots. Perfect lip sync in the music itself. Good choice of the locations which link well to the song and the meaning allowing people to relate to the song and the video as if that could be them. Window scene could be a little clearer, maybe a smoother zoom into the phone shot and the slow motion effect, but a good ending with the artist running away and close ups.
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